Sunday 13 August 2017

Skylah's 5 simile poem





Speeding!
she was speeding as fast as a meerkat.
She zipped out of my way like a flying bat.
As she skated across the concrete she flipped up in the air like a jumping dolphin.
And fell on her backside like a tired horse. That´s why I never speed like a crazy cow.


By Skylah
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 August 2017 at 19:29

    Error in the first bit its suppose to be a capital 'S'

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  2. Anonymous13 August 2017 at 19:29

    Love the story
    CHURRRRRRRRRR

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  3. Anonymous16 August 2017 at 15:37

    🤡NICE🤡

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  4. Anonymous16 August 2017 at 15:37

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  5. Anonymous19 August 2017 at 22:08

    Yeah nice. CHURRRRRRRRRRRR

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  6. Anonymous7 September 2017 at 17:00

    thanks kaden

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